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Test Your Strength
by G Gradito
Dirt and Milk try out the high striker game at the carnival, with Dirt deciding to take a swing at it first.
Comments
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Paula Serrano
I like the choice of environment, the colors and type of characters. I feel like the character poses and the rhythm could be better.
Also little details could enhance the animation, like a breakdown with the hands lower than the keypose when grabbing the hammer, so the hammer feels like it has weight and is not extremely light.
Alex Rodarte
Nice arcs! The "123" could be a lot more fun with specific poses for each number tho (with the character creeping up further like pink panther or smth). Nice work overall!
Leonardo Manzano
nice characters, it will improve the animation if the poses where push more
Siddharth R B
next cartoon series in the making!!
Rachael
could use a little more extreme impact when hitting things (like the game at the end), but that's my only critique!