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Playing Chess Amoung Two Friends
At first the foolish friend take his chess piece and cut the opponent chees piece then he give a smile then the clever friend drunk with words to the opponent and stole his chess piece and then he cut opponent king and win
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Joe Song
That one shot where their positions were changed was like whiplash for me. I would keep them in the same positions for continuity! The only way that is justified is if something in the scene narratively calls for that then you would have them change positions to motivate that camera move. Also, try making the push ins more subtle, not every shot needs a push in!
Isabelle Ouellette
Your animation is nice but be careful whit your camera not to break the 180 degree rule it breaks your flow.
Tom Islava
Maybe a bit too exaggerated?
KC
The chess 'flying off' animations feels a bit too slow. If you pause during the contact for a frame or two longer, and shorten the flying off animation, it would give more impact n looked more natural
Subhra Sankar Das
Good job
Christof
Removing the rook was funny
speshuldelibery
That't not a legal move because the king is already in check from the start