Bad tirk

Joe Song

The eye movements are distracting in that first shot. I'm unsure if he's thinking or addressing someone directly. I'm loving the body mechanics and I'm digging the poses! Also, I had to rewatch a few times to really understand what happened at the end. I'm assuming that an object landed on the pillow after he pulled the lever(kronk). The pillow is closer to the foreground and having something that fast land there was confusing for me because I didn't understand what it was initially.

Tom Islava

The animation's nice but I'm not sure I understand it.

KC

The opening part with the monologue is pretty fun, but the second angle kind of obscuring the lever push to much that I didn't register that the block was from that instead of like.. a shelf or sth

Subhra Sankar Das

Ok, not better