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Turtle Power
Sheldon tries to teach his finishing move
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Joe Song
I'm loving this turtle character! Something to nit pick at I would say that some actions are getting lost in the cuts you're doing for the first few when cutting to the reverse with the monkey looking at us. I would try to reduce the number of cuts like only cutting after the turtle asks "you ever do the twist?". Other than that I'm loving these poses, nice appeal.
Joshua D
great job, nice and fun story, but could use a little more polish
Alex Rodarte
Awesome body animation! The faces would benefit from more eyebrow and lid movement though- felt like the turtle was going o-o the whole time XD
Luca Cajeux
Love the personality that came through
Subhra Sankar Das
Good concept, need more details on the facial parts