Just Don't

Garrett

I think this piece would've benefited from more acting choices. Doesn't have to be crazy but it just felt a little stiff. I like the mood you created though!

Craig P. Smith

Aside from the lips looking like they only have an open closed option, you don't have enough poses, or they don't change enough. There's a little emphasis change with the seated man at the end, but still, there's not enough visual change/emphasis to fully punch the dialogue.

Brian Rusnak

Hey there! I feel that your staging and camera work really helped your story. I also like the minimal movements of your characters. Try mixing up your poses slightly (character in chair moves around a little more), to push this even further. Good job!

Jaime Colque

good work, sure it goes to the top

Kristin Turnipseed

Both characters feel too stiff, could use some moving holds

Blond

Very stiff overall..