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Misinformed Stake out
by Adil Khanna
Army guy is scoping out the hostile territory not aware that his men are being led straight into a trap because a soldier in his unit forgot to warn him.
Comments
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Cameron
Wow, excellent body movement. Lipsynch could use a little work but overall very good.
Davit Martirosyan
animation is normal, but i thinks the sound line is not according to your characters at all
Craig P. Smith
Very nice animation, expressions and lip-syncing. There's still a bit of stiffness to them both though.
Caelan
Wow this shot was quite amazing. Very very very very good body mechanics and natural acting. I felt the characters were believable beings. I just wish the shot had lighting, to make the aestetics a little less boring. Honestly the animation is perfect just the way it is, I Just wish the visuals where more appealing to look at. This good of an animation deserves a little lighting. I rated 11/11
Aloke Sarkar
acting is very good especially the body language of the thin character....you just have to pay attention to the Body mechanics for eg the character does not settles properly after he comes to stop from the run. and the last camera could have been a Over the Shoulder shot
Blond
Aamazing job. Just watch out ofr the lip sync.
Meg j
nice body expressions
Isai Calderon III
The animation is fantastic, but the camera cuts and angles need improvement. Remember to keep the car placement consistent in the shots.
April Slocombe
Could the streams be in the sky? Other than that obscurity, the poses and movements are subtle and the lip sync is great.