« Back to March 2014 Competition
Komen's warning
Description
Komen is warning Luke, but the war is getting to him.
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Garrett
Great idea! I would maybe tweak the framing to mind the silhouettes more (especially in the first shot). I think the ending would've been a good opportunity to make the character go guns ablaze!
Nice job though!
Akshay De
I really liked your scene. I wish I could see this properly animated. it really caught my attention
Serena Gorn
I personally think that this is very good animation. I'm sure if you had more time, you would be able to make it cleaner and more fluid.