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by Suyog Patil
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April Slocombe
Some guidelines appear on the man with the gun from frames 229 - 275 and some of the movements are floaty but I like the lip sync.
Jan Abero
I'm still confused what the concept is conveying this piece. Some the expression on character shooting is a very expressive but I don't know if it fits with the design. Also the waving the gun around doesn't feel like there is any "weight" or any sensation of "Follow though". Take some time playing around with the pendulum to work those kinks out.
Suyog Patil
Yup this is Mine.... hopefully better frm my side still nt gud enough bt am trying my best... critiqs nd comments apperciated'
Britt
i like the gun pointing, but i think you could tone down the arm spread for "it would be bad"