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Detective
by Luisa Sep
Description
A man that just want to know where's his wife, but it looks like the detective won't give him good news.
Comments
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Caelan
naw, just naw
Serena Gorn
It seems very jerky and there isn't that much movement. This piece of dialogue seems like something that should have a lot of hand movement. But there are many good parts such as the way you can tell that he's thinking.