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A minute for your "Troughs"..
by Jan Abero
Description
Just two guys in the bathroom having casual conversation. What's wrong with that?
Comments
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Cameron
The color is distracting. Characters need a lot of work.
Jan Abero
Horrible, Awful, You are Need to work on your shoulders. You should work on your overlapping actions. You need to work on your expressions more.
Caelan
Lacks fundamentals
April Slocombe
A few choppy, fast and floaty movements and also I don't understand why it keeps changing from colour to black and white. Mind you I like the squash and stretch on the man on the right when he says, "Don't cross the streams."
Jaime Colque
I like the gestures