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it is something normally but it has a dialogue very fluid between them.
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Jirair Garabedian
IMO, too overacted
Derek Stewart
Decent movement in this. I'm not sure the poses are quite where this needs to be as they just feel like "too much." What's going on in the scene? Are these characters just here to deliver lines? I see some enthusiasm in the shot though, keep that up as you polish this up!
Mervyn Le MandarinOrange
Animation is good but the poses are not really telling the story.. Need to watch out for overacting poses too.
Stafford Ahartz
The poses were a bit over exaggerated, but I could see the ideas in them. Timing was a bit off on the poses, making it seem snappy.
Jan Abero
On frame 70-76, I don't know if this is just me but the pose looks weird and I don't think he's making a natural lean, the Wight should be on that left shoulder and the hips look awkward.
Craig P. Smith
You've to the poses and the command of the animation, but you're losing the overall cohesion. It looks like a collection of a bunch of unrelated segments of "bits".
Sean McDonald
Great job! This one is really good!
Jason Chan P. L.
Exaggeration is good but in this case, it's a little too strong. Some of the poses do not seem right with the tone of the voices. Good try though.
Jayvon Gomes
there are too many poses expressed