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Planing
by Nabil Sahih
A warned friend his warned camarade.un man is worth two
Comments
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Garrett
Really cool idea! I love the beginning where the man is putting the silencer on. I think the character on the right could've been paid a little more attention (I'm not sure what he's doing or what his intentions are in the scene).
I think messing with the framing more would've allowed more clear silhouettes.
April Slocombe
Good lip sync, animation and poses throughout.
Jan Abero
You'll need more poses for both characters to convey that one is preparing for something while the other is really exhausted.
hamid
left guy looks very stiff also change in poses are not enought
Caelan
Great environment, and great character animation , I just wish there was a bit more story or at least emphasis on the story. I see the guy is holding a gun and he's probably about to do something he shouldn't while the second character is warning him. Thats all good , I personally feel like some more camera angles to really emphasize what's going on would really improved the shot. Other than that you are a spectacular character animator. Good job!