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A General's warning!

by Aloke Sarkar

Final Rating: 3.26. Finished #139 out of 169 entries.

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Animator

Aloke Sarkar

Experience

2 years

Time Taken

5-6 days

Description

couldnt work on the lipsync and expressions......would be happy to recieve feedbacks so that i can improve it further, Thanks.

Comments

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Ruud Harbers

Too bad you couldn't finish it properly. Looks promising!

Brian Heath

a good start...just needs to be finished

Cameron

Lipsynch in this would have made it an excellent animation.

April Slocombe

Good biddy movements and poses but no lip sync.

Mervyn Le MandarinOrange

forgot about the lip sync!! lol...

Craig P. Smith

Too bad you couldn't finish the lip-syncing. What you did do with the animation is very solid. I like the poses and feel of the motion. I like the arm motions on the "good, bad thing" line. Maybe you could tweak the positioning so that the hands don't do that motion in front of the body. It would make it stronger if you could see it in the silhouette.

Stafford Ahartz

good acting choices. Wish there was some lip sync though. Look forward to viewing the final piece.

Cale Royer

Good movement, but their psychic communication skills are a bit unnerving.

[user]

definitely stick with it and finish it up!

Kristopher Grenier

The character animation was decent but the submitter clearly didn't have enough time to lip-sync the dialogue.

Eric Buval

Nice timings. Too bad you didn't get to finish :c