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Suspicious Bridge
by Janice Liu
Anxious construction worker Ed warns fellow worker Steve about the streams...
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Craig P. Smith
Good believable movements. But I think another stronger pose would be called for on the "Why?". I doesn't have to be a big pose, but something. Very nice scene.
Isaiah Ellis
The way the keying is just makes me not want to watch it
Mervyn Le MandarinOrange
Before the 1st guy say his dialogue, he should have a thinking action to indicate he suddenly thought of something important..
[user]
The first character needs a moment of realization to warn the other character. Right now he is eating a sandwich and suddenly breaks from that action without any anticipation.
Jaime Colque
the story and the scene is good but lack polish characters a little more
Britt
nice render! normally i wouldn't like how much shade is on the characters' faces, but it works with simple models like these.