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"don't cross the streams"
the thought behind this animation is , there is guy how knows what can happened if some one cross the streams, so he tells hi buddy to not to cross
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Kevin McCullough
bg guy at the beginning is great, really well done. The rest is just so so, I think its a little under animated given the tone of voices. A fuller bg might help
Garrett
I love the beginning of this.
I think more polishing could have been brought to when the character says "Why?" around 163. He sort of 'pops' up which is kinda funny but also a bit too much maybe? Just my thoughts! Good job though!
Zoe Piel
Nice secondary action on the big guy. Very lively!
Sarah Talbot
nice job keeping both characters active the entire time. The shot edit during the larger character's dialogue is a bit jarring, however, and make following his lips difficult
Derek Stewart
Nice idea. There's a clear message in this, and I haven't decided if it's funny or a bit dark. Maybe both. But I like it. Needs some work on appeal in the wounded character and some more polish on the lip sync. Other than that, it's headed in a good direction!
Jon Coppock
love that Groggy characters attitude
Patrick King
The movement of the characters looks pretty fluid, but you broke the 180 rule. Also, make your cuts during the action of the guy turning.
Daniel Roldan
Great "What?"