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This Seems Fishy

by Alisha Lopez

Final Rating: 2.36. Finished #162 out of 169 entries.

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Animator

Alisha Lopez

Experience

Student

Time Taken

It took me a couple weeks

Description

Two fish debating on crossing the streams.

Comments

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Davit Martirosyan

WTF? I can't see anything....

Cameron

All I see is black

Jasmine Bobe

no video during playback

Daniel Hollister

sorry, just a black screen?

Zoe Piel

Blank screen?

Jon Coppock

Black Screen

Samo

no visuals

Mervyn Le MandarinOrange

Codec error!!

Lance Erickson

I don't like how this is staged; the characters are dead center. Remember to use the rule of thirds. Also consider trying different angles to tell the story.

Caelan

My Screen went black on this one, So I Honestly don't know the quality of this sorry :( I rated inbetween

Robert Medrano

cant see the video

Paulina Brinck

all i saw was black

Sophie Bracmard

The animation isn't bad but there is a big problem with the eyes of the characters. They are white most of the time and the smallest fish's ones make a really weird move between frame 60 and 70.

Britt

can't see the video :(

April Slocombe

The tall, pale blue character's mouth could move more during his first line but the lip sync improves after this. Also are those sharks, shards of glass or sheets of ice floating on the stream at the end! Despite this confusion, I like the logs floating on the steam.