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Space Streams
by Angel GM
Just Finish Character animation Course
10 days 4 hours a day
Space mision
Comments
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Derek Stewart
Cool idea! I like that moving camera; really adds to the drama here. What needs work at this point is the hand poses, lip sync, and body mechanics. The streams in the distance feel a bit out of place too. Keep at it!
Lance Erickson
The 2 streams appear to be inside the ship rather than outside it.
Joel Murphy
Camera angle tilting became distracting. Careful with how it's staging your action. When the character in yellow walks toward the camera, I felt the cam move was good, but while he was sitting, I focused more on the movement of the cam then the characters.
April Slocombe
I like the idea of this on board a spaceship and the streams appearing in the sky. The poses on "What?" and "Why?" are a tad cliched but the rest of the poses are good as well as the animation and the lip sync.