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Experiment

by Ngoh Zhi Hou

Final Rating: 3.18. Finished #141 out of 169 entries.

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Animator

Ngoh Zhi Hou

Experience

I'm a student

Time Taken

3 weeks

Description

A Scientist try to mix the liquid but the assistant told him not to mix it

Comments

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Melissa

need some fluidity

Mervyn Le MandarinOrange

Animation overall look unfinished.. Moving hold is too stiff..

Jan Abero

Watch the floating in your motions. I'm guessing the issues on the floating is more due to timing and spacing but that's why i'm having trouble looking for that fluidity. The key poses and the most of the interpolations look great but just adding a little inbetween keyframe does help in creating contrast in your movements so it doesn't look too stiff or too floaty.

Lance Erickson

The way the guy puts the object on the table looks more like he's tossing it across the table.