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Not at Church!
You cant pee like that, not at Church.
Also Im new here.
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Brian Heath
wow...im surprised this is my first urinal animation this month... but the art style is interesting...
Sam H
The animation feels nice and natural with the exception of the short dudes (tweened?) movement in frames 122-180. This movement is slightly jarring thrown in the rest of the animation. other than that nice work personalty and emotion came across well.
Zoe Piel
I love this sort of cartoony linework.
Casey Colledge
I knew this idea would be done...a lot. But these characters made me laugh. Lip sync could use some attention.
Lance Erickson
This almost reminds me of the old Pink Panther cartoons.
Matthew Kenyon
The lip sync is off a bit in the beginning. Frames 275 through 280 were perfect.
Jaime Colque
What does a church in this?
Tomas Patlan
I would like to see them make eye-contact. The eye direction now makes the character on screen-right seem to be looking elsewhere
Joel Murphy
I love the pointing down gesture as he says "don't cross the streams" haha great animation!
Guy Charnaux
Lovely style! Kinda reminds me of Cordell Barker's style.
April Slocombe
The lip sync on the tall guy looks off to begin with and I'm not sure if the short guy should be smiling. Other than that their poses and animation are subtly done.
Daniel Roldan
at frame 247 (just before the one guy says "why?") the skinny guy should keep eye contact with the other one, then point down first, quick glance down at what he's pointing at and back to eye contact with the chubby guy, then the chubby guy should look while the skinny guy keeps looking firmly at him. Also dont just point at it, do a little finger movement to keep him alive