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Dont cross the stream

by Benjamin Tan

Final Rating: 1.86. Finished #168 out of 169 entries.

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Animator

Benjamin Tan

Experience

1 month

Time Taken

5 days

Description

a hunter is finding his prey,when he about to cross the stream to c find more prey his partner told him something

Comments

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Nasser Mohammed

The character was jerky in this animation and at some point was not in sync with the piece.

Lance Erickson

Too much jumping to key poses and the legs move erratically. They need to be smoothed out.

Jan Abero

So Umm...Yeah...Take your time on your character Rig. Get in the habit to posing out and drawing your ideas out before putting you start working with the rig.

Tobias Egeli

you made me laugh tho:)

Zoe Piel

That guy is tweakin

[user]

you should pick a simpler rig than Morpheus

April Slocombe

The man holding the gun has some very jerky, jittery movements and his leg pose on frame 144 is unnatural.

lakshmipathi

what happened ????? control the posing, practice 1st

Sam H

words fail me.