Advise

Cameron

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think the Heavy is copyrighted.

Eric Balistrieri

Try to watch your twinning.

Daniel Hollister

Animation is good, but i feel the composition of the shot with the camera could be improved upon.

syrus johnson

the rig in the back bad on everything in a bad rig for a line like this

Adam Singer

Nice work :) One thought I had was that the characters would probably seem to fit better if their roles were reversed (big guy asks "why?") Not much help now I know, but maybe a good thing to consider next time :) Keep it up!

Mervyn Le MandarinOrange

Front guy should have turn back to face the character behind..

Craig P. Smith

Animation looks very smooth, but there's a lot of twinning of the arms of the man on the railing (both arms doing the same thing at the same time). You should either vary the timing, or the poses.
Also, it's difficult to see the guy with the gun when he's talking, and the pose doesn't completely sell it on it's own. Maybe you should adjust the scene composition a little.
The texturing, and lighting are spectacular.

Arif Rao

nice

Luke Bridger

this is supposed to be animation competition not a rendering competition!! also background character seems to have no translate y on the hips

Jaime Colque

good job, I like the scene

Wolfgang Haas

Symmetry isn't a bad thing per se, but if nearly all poses are symmetrical, it is.