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1000 Distracted
Description
"Some common work place discussions is interrupted by some rather big new"
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ben malberg
I like your hand poses, and the scene setup. Couple of mechanical nitpicks. The shoulder movement at around f247 feels slow. The overshoot of the body at around f98 feels abrupt. I might smooth that out a little more.
I like you pose anticipations. f86, f160, f233
Erich Hess
More weight-shift, probably have him take a step, when he gestures and talks to the side.