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College Distraction
by Brock Horton
Description
A college student is being reprimanded by his teacher, but acts completely hypocritical
Comments
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ben malberg
Some good poses, I think it needs more breakdowns of the movement to carve out stronger arcs and spacing,.
David O. Diaz
Greatest aspect of this piece is that you chose the right amount of poses to use for it. Improve on weight distribution and stronger poses and you'll have incredible work.
Erich Hess
the foreground character's body movements are a bit swimmy, then stick for a bit. The "attention" lipsync ends awkwardly.