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A little bit too much...
by Alex Mlqd
3 months on a TV shows.
5 days to thinking about it, 17 days to animate it, 2 days to render it.
The man tries to impress the girl by his charisma and the dialog.
She's impressed and she doesn't know really what to say.
But she shows a little bit too much hes feelings and he's disappointed about her.
Comments
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Josh C
Good! I like the acting a lot, although I can't understand the treatment of the "Indonesia" line.
Nassim Briedj
good one but we don't see the react of the women at the end, i guess its suitable
salman siavashi
nice
Borislav Dimitrov
something i se in nearly 60 shot like this one is the guy turning back pretending like he is asking someone if they heard of indonesia... and i can say its not woking. it will be much better if you use some kind of a prop to sell the idea of him talking to someone.
David O. Diaz
The girl's "wow" pose is weakened by the large body movements in the rest of her line. She thrusts forward on wow, shakes her head, shifts weight, grabs glasses, etc. Removing just one of the actions would give more time to showcase all the other poses. Guy's posing is crisp and authentic.
Raghav Nagpal
Initially second character is dead while Malcom is in focus. Other wise it nice animation.