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Business Man

by Diamond Payne

Final Rating: 4.66. Finished #56 out of 228 entries.

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Animator

Diamond Payne

Experience

2 years

Time Taken

26 hours

Description

Business is this guys number one priority.

Comments

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Kirsten Schow

One thing that stands out to me is how much the man's mouth is moving. Perhaps some smoother transitions, just so you can hint at the words being said. :) The girl's lip sync is just the right amount of movement, though.

Connor Leuck

I would almost like to see this orthographically.

ben malberg

Looking pretty good so far. Some of the body parts freeze, which caught my eye. I might exaggerate the acting a bit more.

Erich Hess

mouth up and down is too rapid-fire at times.