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One moment

by Kawin Suteepongsopon

Final Rating: 6.73. Finished #8 out of 228 entries.

3,703 views

Experience

3 y

Time Taken

2-3 weeks after work

Description

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Comments

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roy cobn

nice. but u could cut to the woman in her line...

kristin

i like it a lot (:
I think if you move your camera closer to the guy it would improve your animation. (i would love to see the facial animation a bit closer ;) )

John

Looks great. Looks a bit out of sync mid dialogue though.

Alec Farai Munhapa

well done :)

Kiran Jay Babla

Pretty decent animation, would've been nice to have pulled the camera in tighter to see more.

salman siavashi

nice

Michael O'Brien

A great character, totally predictable behavior yet somehow surprising and hilarious that he would just get up and leave like that. I think you could cut out the beginning shot because it's more important for us to get a read of this male character than it is of the female and as of now, the shot already feels like it drags down the beginning. I think a brief shot of him glancing through her file, up to her, and back down to the file would do the job.