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roy cobn
nice. but u could cut to the woman in her line...
kristin
i like it a lot (:
I think if you move your camera closer to the guy it would improve your animation. (i would love to see the facial animation a bit closer ;) )
John
Looks great. Looks a bit out of sync mid dialogue though.
Alec Farai Munhapa
well done :)
Kiran Jay Babla
Pretty decent animation, would've been nice to have pulled the camera in tighter to see more.
salman siavashi
nice
Michael O'Brien
A great character, totally predictable behavior yet somehow surprising and hilarious that he would just get up and leave like that. I think you could cut out the beginning shot because it's more important for us to get a read of this male character than it is of the female and as of now, the shot already feels like it drags down the beginning. I think a brief shot of him glancing through her file, up to her, and back down to the file would do the job.





