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the Reporter
by ben
Reporter guy uses fancy words in order to catch a girl's attention
Comments
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kristin
the camera movement is a bit irritating ..
Alex Mlqd
I think you don't have to move your camera like this.
"KISS : Keep it simple and stupid"
One of the better rules of animation :)
Salvador David Tinoco Canizales
pretty good but needs work. and the movements of the camera... please, don`t do that.
John
reconsider camera actions
Meridith Winterfeld
the flipping of the camera disorients the viewer
Yara Ruiz Morelos
camera movement is to much..
Drew Covert
I would like to see this without all the camera moves, I think they hurt the shot. It's a bit too snappy as well but nice job
Connor Leuck
Your camera broke the 180 degree rule.
They are also moving at the same time for most of it.
Jacob Brown-Parrish
I think you should read up on the 180 degree rule
James Loeser
The quick camera movement is very distracting
Kieran Gunn
There is far too much happening in this submission.
It seems you have tried to fit in so many poses that it all gets very confusing and we can't look at both characters at the same time. When a character isn't speaking don't give them a lot of actions so that the audience can focus on the speaker.
The camera move is wholly unnecessary and breaks the 180 rule.
I think the character are also standing too close to other for a conversation between strangers.
Other than that there is some good animation in there, just need to tone it down.
Borislav Dimitrov
what are those silly camera moves...
you can keep the camera as it is in frame 35 and thats it..