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Description
A girl is demanded to go to some places for your boss.
Comments
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Connor Leuck
Maybe lengthen the intro. It was
Yara Ruiz Morelos
haha i like the idea. I think you still need on the lip sync of the guy
roy cobn
its look like shes bigger in the frame...
Nassim Briedj
there is a problem with the scale of the characters
ben malberg
The camera position on the 2nd shot makes Malcolm look small. I might move the camera to a 3/4 angle or change the position of the characters so the viewer can better understand the dimensions. I like his spin at the end.
Erich Hess
Cheat the guy's head toward the camera a bit.