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Night Out
by VanG
Teenager at a bar with loose mum
Comments
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Gaucelm De Villaret
Suitable enough. It's appropriately made. Maybe a bit more exaggeration could be applied for maximum fun... Or not?
Marcella D.
Not bad, but the mother's movement, before the daughter speaks, is a bit weird. A little tilt back, and forth is not bad, but she does it way too quickly.
Thomas Holcombe
to much movement
Fernando Incetta
Good work. You need to rely a little bit less in the automated curves. Also don't be afraid to exaggerate and to push your poses and facial expressions further.
Kambria J. Farmer
In my opinion, the camera movements, as well as the over-exaggerated movements of the mother's head, make the animation too busy and take away from the really nice actions that you have achieved within your shot.