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Alcohol in this?
A shy girl who doesn't want to drink alcohol and a woman who thinks s a "cool mom".
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Maryline Chemoula
I love it ! The only think that stops me for giving full points is that Mery stops moving completely when the camera moves to Bonnie. And Bonnie herself is stuck below the chest . It's sad because it deserves full points i think. :)
VanG
Your Mery was animation was great but the other one seemed to be still in the timing stage.
Sabrina Winkel
Great acting. Good camera angles
Sarah Schulze
Camera angle choic and Idea are nice! Maybe you want to change some posing becaus eright now I feel that she is not really moving enough.
Craig Joseph Massa
Try adding the moving holds. Not to say what you have here is bad, it just looks like they are robots when they just sit still. Other than that pretty good!
Marcella D.
Characters are too stiff
Fernando Incetta
Good poses overall, don't be afraid to push them even further. Exaggeration is one of the principles of animation. Good luck