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Alcohol
Description
I was pretty busy lately, so this one is kind of rushed. Anyway, here's what I had. Hope you like it!
Comments
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Marcella D.
If the main focus is going to be the daughter, have more movement on the daughter.
Gaucelm De Villaret
Quite stiff, there is some good idea for the expressions, but there is unnecessary movement, and the lack of the other character cheapens it a bit.
Fernando Incetta
A promising blocking. Keep it up!
Monica Stringer
when you have all the attention of the character that does the least amount of speaking, you need to really up the ante with those expressions.
Ariyanto Zulkifli
too stiff