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Underage Drinker
I have 3 months of experience.
It took me 1 week and 4 days to animate this.
A daughter asks her mother about the alcohol content in her beverage.
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Marcella D.
By far, the mother has the best facial expression, and movement. I just wish the guy, and daughter had the same result.
Michael Kristiansen
Decently done. Only thing that I notice is the mother seems to only move her upper body which looks weird to me. Shifting her weight from one leg to the other, or simply translate the pelvis some could fix the problem.
sebastian bravo
Think more about the composition because all the attention goes straight to the third character and you have a nice animation on the mother.
Terence Staples
Smooth and great animation. Perfect.
Richard Adams
I like how the background guy reacts when mom says "in the house".
Zachary
Good animation on the taller female but I feel the smaller one could use more work in her walk
Kambria J. Farmer
I would practice working on the lip sync for sure. You have a really nice start and I can see that all of the shapes are there, but the slurring that she uses when she speaks needs improved so that you can better avoid the "jabber jaw" effect that she has.
Fernando Incetta
Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.
Chad Cox
The guy choking cracks me up! Totally makes it relatable, great idea!
Monica Stringer
love the guy in the back
Gaucelm De Villaret
A bit too simple... could be fitting, there is good basic poses, and I like the middle part... maybe she reacts a bit too smoothly to the alcohol question and remains a bit static at the end... the rest is okay... maybe it is the best, however...
S J Bennett
Subtle! The spit take was perfect, bravo!