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Collectively Less than a Year
A week and a half
Patrick M Animation II Midterm
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Marcella D.
Needs better character movement.
Yongliang Zhao
Fernando Incetta
Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.
Melanie Sanchez-Matos
You have a good setup and your models' movements are well done, but the mother's lipsynching is a little off starting from 178 to 248. Also when she scoots over, her body just slides over with not much effect on the rest of her body. Overall, it's a really good effort.
brandon
The lip syncing in the most notifiable mistake within this animation. There is some unnecessary elbow movement. Good job with the facial emotion of the brown haired character.
Gaucelm De Villaret
You seem to be going in the right direction for the set-ups, but there is still a lack of expressions and kinda stiff stereotyped body movements...