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Alcohol or not?

by PIKU

Final Rating: 5.08. Finished #43 out of 310 entries.

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Animator

PIKU

Experience

1-2 years

Time Taken

one week

Description

Melodramatic friend's mom is not so humble...

Comments

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OceanicBoy Joey

The moving hold of the eight character abit too much imo, keep moving abiy distracting

Ariyanto Zulkifli

very nice. good acting.
In my opinion, too many blocking in face movement (blue dress child) make it a bit robotic. the mom acting is very good compared to the girl. keep it up, nice animation btw. :)

Deanna Keogh

Last couple frames were missing facial animation and some of the lip syncing seemed a bit off. Good overall effort

Marcella D.

Wish that the green square, and X,Y, Z was not in here.

John

Pretty good, but the daughter seems to move on a timer. Every second or so, she moves, which is a little distracting to me for some reason.

Terence Staples

Great facial animation. Evokes the emotion presented really well.

Kambria J. Farmer

The facial movements on the first speaking character (blue shirt) are much more realistic and subtle than the second speaking character. If you clean up her expressions, you will have a well rounded animation.

Jose Virgil

seems like a lot of pose to pose action, but good movements

Gaucelm De Villaret

Right track, but not very rightly-executed... animation goes in bumps, which doesn't feel very natural...