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MeanGirls
by N I Naiem
Mom gave her a drinks. The girl is confused is there alcohol or not.
Comments
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Ariyanto Zulkifli
nice try.
the animation is floaty in my opinion, timing a bit off (need reference), and when the mom whisper to the kid, the scene is jumpy.
but keep polishing your fundamental of animation will help a lot. try to shoot some reference. Keep trying and practicing. :)
Marcella D.
Facial expression need to express some emotion, and please fix the eye before you export.
Gaucelm De Villaret
Feels a bit too stereotyped and expected...
Connor Leuck
Your lip sync can't be seen with the hand in front of the mother's mouth.
Fernando Incetta
Nice WIP, it is a prominsing blocking stage
Monica Stringer
holy whiplash batman, that was a VERY fast cut to whispering in the daughters ear. Maybe add some anticipation to that so it doesn't seem out of the blue
Alex E.
OH MY GOD HER EYES.