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Do it in the house
by Phill Clough
Description
Young girl is curious about the cough medicine she has been given.
Comments
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Gaucelm De Villaret
This is more emoting rather than expressing. The characters don't feel much like they are interacting with one another, which is the point of that dialogue.
Sarah Schulze
Nice Idea, the only thing maybe is that your charachters are moving to much. You may want to reduce a little bit :)
Lechard P
over exaggeration in the second character gives off weird vibe
Marcella D.
The lightening is a distraction
Fernando Incetta
Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.