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Ancient mom and daughter

by Mohamad Rahman

Final Rating: 3.74. Finished #145 out of 310 entries.

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Animator

Mohamad Rahman

Experience

3 weeks

Time Taken

5 days

Description

One fine day, in thesupermarket. Mother and her daughter want to buy some drink.

Comments

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Maryline Chemoula

I loooove the idea .The art is cute and everything works together but there are little jumps sometimes in the camera or in the animation .

Sabrina Winkel

Try to have the characters move slower

Gaucelm De Villaret

Yes, it is fully rendered and colored, and looks like a finished product, but the expressions and movements are too basic, few and stiff.

Rahim

Like it, This is a like commericial work! haha

Marcella D.

The animation is a bit too quick, but I do like the set up.

Melanie Sanchez-Matos

Your character designs are very charming. There is some delay to the character's mouth movements when the audio begins to start. The mother's mouth movements are well timed, but after she takes the bottle from the girl it looks awkward from that angle. The audio also cuts off at the end.

Fernando Incetta

Good job. It looks a little bit unfinished but with lots of potential. Keep it up