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exchange student
Japanese exchange student stays with a family of vikings
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Daniel Miltinan
Still needs quite a bit more inbetweening
Gaucelm De Villaret
Kudos for the effort of drawing all that. Unfortunately, the design of the characters are not very consistent for the setup... A bit of a mishmash... The movements are too fast and basic to comprehend, and they feel a bit empty. This seems to be a case of looks-before-substance.
Steve Schwartz
90-138, she is all over the place and it doesn't really read too well. I would tone her movement down, or at least restrict it to only arm movement.
Jordan Lewers
Appealing characters, but the posing and animation are lacking
Marcella D.
Ok.
Mark Hanson
Too many out of control poses. It's all over the place but it does retain the characters' integrity and shapes
Connor Leuck
There are too many cuts making it hard to process everything happening.
Keely Imai
Looks good overall, nice and clean. There a couple of things that could really help push this: timing and making sure your characters are maintaining consistent size. I mainly noticed this through frames 100-140. Good work!
Monica Stringer
the mothers movements are a bit to jerky and hard to follow