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embarrassing mom
by Marcos Gómez
Not much. This is my second 11secondclub animation
5 days more or less.
This mom is a little bit strange. She wanna be friendly with her daughter, but is not.
Comments
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Sarah Schulze
Animation is fluid like that! It would have be great if you could change the "camera angle" or if not, you may want to change the posing angle of the "mother". Because, as you may know, profil angle are note the best angle. Nice work! :)
Steve Schwartz
This is great! I would have liked to see more, the mother is great but she is so blown out from the scan that it's hard to see everything.
Анжелика Троицкая
Super!
Connor Leuck
The girl does not react to the mothers dialogue until the end. The mother's animation is very appealing though. This just needs more inbetweens!
Sabrina Winkel
She disappears
Marcella D.
Not bad
Jordan Lewers
Very appealing characters and good animation overall, though I'd prefer a few more keyframes for the woman on the right at the end. That way, I can better grasp how she's positioning herself against the table
Gaucelm De Villaret
Kudos for the effort of drawing that... but you could have gone even further! The "a-ha Take on me" fading quality doesn't really lend itself well to this kind of exercise... there are glimpses of good expressions, but this is a good concept that isn't played out as well as it could be...
Fernando Incetta
Good WIP, it certainly has potential.
Chad Cox
Love the "alcohol" delivery, lots of great subtle acting by the daughter, well done!
Ariyanto Zulkifli
the line really hard to see. but the animation is great in my opinion.