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First time's Cider
It's always worth a shot.
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Sabrina Winkel
I like the end
Jessica "Jess" Jerome
Love the animation with the daughter, and the end were she loves the cider.
The mother however could use some more work. Her acting choices at first are pretty good, but i would have had her acting a little more annoyed when she said "Why do you want...etc". Instead you have her acting calm, which isn't what the audio sounds like.
Also, i assume its a animation/character style of yours, but i would consider putting in fingers with the hands! It will add to your animation a lot!
Great job doing another competition! Can't wait to see what you come up with next month.
Connor Leuck
spent more time on animation after the dialogue. It was good though.
Marcella D.
Not bad
Jason Klavir
YOOOOCHHIMMM
Fernando Incetta
A good starting point, but adding to much actions after the audio finished looks off.
Alex E.
The character designs are a little too similar to tell the difference and THAT'S WAY OVER 11 SECONDS. Still cool, though.
Gaucelm De Villaret
Okay, it seems you wanted more to show more in quantity here... this is not a bad motivation, but what matters here is the expression shown... what is here is not bad, but a bit too simple... yes, it may be fitting to the style, but it could have more at times, like when she is shown leaning at the end of the dialogue...