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by Joselin F. Zamudio

Final Rating: 2.46. Finished #272 out of 310 entries.

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Experience

one year

Time Taken

four days

Description

Mother and daughter talking in the car

Comments

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Marcella D.

Would be nice to see a moving background, but what I am seeing right now just needs to have better facial expressions.

Charlie Abb

Nice background. Characters do not fit voices.

Gaucelm De Villaret

Barely emotions. Stiff shots. Needs more. Much more.

Fernando Incetta

Good. You should work a lot more on your poses before starting to use curves. There's a decent amount of effort in faces, but not so much in body language.