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Birthday Punch
by Naomi Fear
It's Kyle's 8th birthday party and the punch his mum made isn't quite what he was expected.
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Gaucelm De Villaret
Like this one quite a bit! Good interpretation, rightful expressions, cheeky but not too much, quite funny, right doses, and the setup makes it believable and fitting,
Sharkhead
Really cool! A few improvements needs to be made but so far, really nicce!
VanG
Top 10
Rachel Col
Some of the best expressions I've seen so far! Awesome work!
Jessica "Jess" Jerome
love the facial expressions
John Michael Wilyat
Alright! This has a lot of good things happening. Very creative use of the mom. I like that you used her squat as an anchor for the audio.
Robert Markland
Brilliant key poses, and a good sense of comedic timing!
Marcella D.
Not bad
Pablo Arderíus
Nice, but lipsync needs more improvement
Isaac Holzwarth
Nice job!
Bokang Koatja
Love the kid. Mom's mouth shapes are a little wide though
Lea
Really lovely overall, love the body language of the mom. The only thing that bothers me a bit is how restrained the little giggle feels, like it needs to be divided into two small motions instead of one big one.
Fernando Incetta
Great job! Really fluid and full of humor.
Monica Stringer
very well done, love the setting and the animation is nicely done (love the subtle eye movements)