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Alcohol? Me? Ah!

by Steph

Final Rating: 4.99. Finished #49 out of 310 entries.

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Animator

Steph

Experience

5 years (series)

Time Taken

~8 half-days maybe ...

Description

It's lunchtime, a mother came for a drink with her daughter.

Comments

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Gaucelm De Villaret

Feels fine enough. Just having the mother seen is abit cheapening, maybe... The level of expression feels a bit non-believable, maybe... Could use some depth, maybe...

Steve Schwartz

Don't think you really need the girl's hand in there, the second cup tells enough. Also, the mother does a lot of hand movements.

Ramon Arango

you are a bit overambitious with your posing starting at 157. try to really focus on the essential poses. 2 are probably enough and then bring in elements to convey the thoughtprocess. the beginning works much better

Marcella D.

Very lovely dear.

Sarathbabu A S

posses are good, but changes, the pose to another pose, is getting floaty feel, nice work keep it up..,.,.,

Fernando Incetta

Great body language and hand animations.

Connor Leuck

Nice hand animation!

Jordan Lewers

Mery is pretty sassy in this one, isn't she? Good stuff!