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Proper Hosting
by Zachary Zika
The host of a dinner party has begun to exceed her drinking limits.
Comments
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Gaucelm De Villaret
Characters standing still too much... Expressions a bit too expected/stereotypical...
John Michael Wilyat
Lacking some fundamentals but I like the simplicity of the characters and animation overall. Could use more overlap in the limbs.
Sabrina Winkel
That was awsome and cool
Kirsty Seymour
The lip sync was really good and the expressions used were very clear to show the emotion of the characters. Love the little details of the olive jumping up when she's surprised and the small spillage of her drink.
Overall, a really good animation, I would only say that maybe you could add some movement to their body when they're talking to add more life and motion to the character :)
Marcella D.
The facial expression, and lip movement is way too quick
Fernando Incetta
Cool guys! Work a little bit more on body language instead of relying too much on faces.