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Spiked
A daughter catches her mother spiking the punch
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Gaucelm De Villaret
Good cartoon body expressions! Interesting to have the "surprise" element with a bit of comedy, it is a great addition/incorporation. It would have been even better to add more at the end.
OceanicBoy Joey
Cool idea that the 2nd character got shocked ! XD need improvenment on the actions tho
Fernando Incetta
Good work. Nice use of body language, but the facial expressions look a little bit dull in comparison. Work a little bit more on them and you will have a really nice piece. Good luck!
Coleton McMillan
The movement in the animation is pretty solid, and I really like the little struggle at the beginning to catch the flask. The lip sync could use some work though. Near the end right when you switched the camera back to the mother she seems to just move her lips between two positions. She doesn't really say any words. Even though I understand the intent was to make her look like she was whispering, you still need to make the words seem like she is saying them to be believable. Besides that problem well done on pretty much everything else.
Monica Stringer
not bad, needs some more exaggerated expressions in the last bit