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Mechanic Knows Best

by Jessica Chiarella

Final Rating: 4.32. Finished #89 out of 310 entries.

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Experience

3 months

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

What's the problem with drinking in the garage?

Comments

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Gaucelm De Villaret

Fun interpretation and idea. Well enough execution, though it lacks some energy, maybe.

Jordan Lewers

Interesting concept, I love the idea of a mechanic talking to the kid! However, the object the kid was referring to wasn't immediately known, especially since the direction he's pointing in doesn't match the position of the flask. Nobody really acknowledges its presence until the end, and that's when I took notice

Marcella D.

Not bad

Fernando Incetta

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.

[user]

Points for having a mom whose doing something other than preparing a meal.