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No Alcohol, Honey!
Description
A young noblewoman curious to a certain drink her mother drank. What could possibly she drank? Is she mature enough to drink it?
Comments
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Karl Bernhardt
nice characters, needs some more intbetweens and
Ariyanto Zulkifli
The idea and execution is quite good. but when around frame 100 the shot a bit jumpy. and too much overlapping in my opinion.
Keep it up
Marcella D.
Not bad
Gaucelm De Villaret
Awww, you could have had a real winner with this one! I like the part where the mom turns around, but there are some stiff moments, and brutal jump-cuts that prevent it from being as good as it could be... but keep on!