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Arriola_Christian_Sub
What goes in the house, stays in the house. My entry, which was overall a fun project, where I was focused on getting the subtle body movements and facial expressions into the animation.
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alex
smaller props
Marcella D.
Needs improvement
John
This was ok, but what might have made it better is if you had exaggerated the movements more. Subtle, real-life movements don't always come across very well in animations.
Sabrina Winkel
Everything looks wrong. Even the cup!
Gaucelm De Villaret
Kinda stiff and lacking in emotion... there is the good potential, but not enough energy and flexibility...
Terence Staples
Good lip sync
Keith Douglas
The timing is nice, but the movements are way too stiff. The drinking glasses are too big, and the characters lacking any personalty. Don't forget your 12 principles of animation.





