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Final Rating: 3.08. Finished #226 out of 310 entries.

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Animator

Paul Boogaards

Experience

5 years of animation school, 4 years of art classes and 2 years of acting school.

Time Taken

a month

Description

A mother takes her daughter out for lunch and she asks if there is any alcohol in her drink.

Comments

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Gaucelm De Villaret

Not much to write home about... At first, the expressions are barely noticeable/effective... But then, I am more surprised by the expressions of the daughter that she randomly makes at the end. What was that about?

Ariyanto Zulkifli

nice try.
but, the timing is off. make some real life reference will help you greatly. Keep practicing. :)

Marcella D.

Fix the daughters hair, and facial expression

Charlie Abb

Lip synch a little off. Nice realistic props (i.e. glasses).

Fernando Incetta

Nice setting but the animations needs work. Try to work more in poses during blocking instead on relying to much on automated curves. Good luck