« Back to March 2016 Competition
No alcohol here!
A mother trying to hide that she is drunk.
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Maryline Chemoula
Hi.
It needs work but my biggest problem is the change of camera angle which breaks the 180 rule. The over the shoulder is good but then Mery should move at least a little. Keep it up :)
OceanicBoy Joey
The other character gone static.. I assume is not finish?
Amin Bahari
breaking the 180 rule was confusing; try to avoid that in the future.
Marcella D.
Not bad
Jordan Lewers
Interesting performance, but very odd use of camera cuts
Michael Kristiansen
Confusing with the camera angle change, but looks good.
Fernando Incetta
Good facial expressions. The cut is a little bit unnecessary. Also, try to add at least some extra keys in the daughter, she looks absolutely still right now
Monica Stringer
Since your mostly focusing on the mother I understand why you didn't animated the daughter, but it still is a bit off to not have her moving. it would be less awkward looking probably if she wasn't there at all and we jus saw the mother. other than that, good job